Wednesday, April 14, 2010

This is a poem I wrote about winter. The feedback I would like is what you like about it and I would like some suggestions on what to name it!(:

Walking really slow
Boots in the snow
Tromping all around
My feet sink into the ground
Animals hibernating
Instead of celebrating
Rosy cheeks
Frozen over creeks
The smell of hot cocoa
Makes everyone go loco
Later I'll go inside
A warm place to hide
And I'll come out in the Summer
When being outside isn't such a bummer

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  2. I like the way you rhyme! I also like the funny and creative lines!

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